Walang Hanggan [LP]

Para sa linggong ito, sasamahan ko ng maikling kwento ang aking lahok para maiba naman. Pasensha na kung hindi Tagalog.

buses swept by in front of her, blurring the vision of the other side of the street in repeated episodes. she must cross the street; never mind that death dangled even in the cardboard signages on the vehicles.

standing on the curb of a busy street, the girl with a mission started getting rather annoyed stares from civilians who would rather have the sidewalk wider without her on it. she was taking up space.

‘are you gonna cross the street or what, lady!?’, said one look.

she had not always been a risk-taker. she was completely content with her own, quiet, albeit a little boring life. that much she willingly admitted. until, of course, the complications of love had made a ‘mess’ out of it. nevertheless, the lessons she learned in the process of realigning her life with this new-found love had been all worth it.

the girl with a mission to cross the street returned to the sight before her. it was suicide. it was hell. but stepping back onto the middle of the rushing highway of foot traffic was equally perilous. she had no choice.

she had also not realized that time had been consumed. the traffic flanking her two sides seemed to ignore her growing fright and panic. boldly, she took the first step.

then the second, then the third. vehicles let out an outbreak of honks and screeches while the girl criss-crossed her way across the street. a bumper near-misses her. she let out a gasp, but, thank God, she was still intact. just a few more feet…

like breaking away from a horrid nightmare (a redundancy, i know), the girl is extremely relieved to be finally standing on the other side of the street. how she had passed through unscathed — with just some emotional bruises — was mystifying to her. she simply looked up and murmured a heartfelt ‘thank you’.

“well, what took you so long?” someone came up to her. it was not so much as a scolding, but a teasing comment made in such a sweet manner.

“i was caught up… in the traffic. i’m sorry.” the girl smiled with love in her eyes.

“it doesn’t really matter,” he said taking her hand in his, “you’re here now, aren’t you?” suddenly, the girl realized, it wasn’t a very scary world anymore.

Ang maikling kwento ay inilathala sa aking dating blog (na hosted ni ate pao) noong September 2004.

Ang larawan ng aking mga kaibigan ay kinuha ko noong April 2005 sa Pagudpud. Sana’y inyong nagustuhan pareho. :) Maligayang Huwebes sa inyo!

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65 Responses to “Walang Hanggan [LP]”

  1. Buge says:

    Ang ganda ng pagkakakuha mo sa mga kaibigan mo! At naiyak ako sa maikli mong kwento… haaaayyyy… sana tayo din ay magkaroon na ng ganyan no? :)

    Happy LP Iris!

  2. ang cute naman, iris! soooo sweet!

    jerome aka bridget jones’s last blog post..LP # 10: Pag-iisang Dibdib (Marriage) on http://aborrowedlife.wordpress.com

  3. Grey says:

    napakaganda ng litrato mo pati na rin un kwento! 2 beses na ako nagpunta ng pagudpud at kahit malayo worth it talaga! i wont mind going back there all over again.. :) mabuhay LP!

    Grey’s last blog post..L.P. #10: Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://www.grey24.multiply.com

    • iris says:

      ako rin grey, sobrang nainlove talaga ako sa lugar na yun. nakakatakot lang yung undercurrent at waves minsan, pero the scenery, the environment is worth it nga :)

      salamat at happy weekend sayo!

  4. lino says:

    uy, sweeeet! pasensya na at ako’y huli, pero narito na rin po ang aking bahagi para sa linggong ito… happy LP… :)

    lino’s last blog post..pag-iisang dibdib… on http://linophotography.com

  5. abby says:

    great story to go with a great photo! :)

  6. kengkay says:

    maganda pala talaga sa pagudpod ano? nakarating na ako dyan pero hindi kami nakapag beach e.

    kengkay’s last blog post..Wine Tasting on http://kengkay.wordpress.com

  7. Dragon Lady says:

    aliw naman nitong lahok mo! napakatamis nang tinginan at kilos nang magsing-irog sa larawan (ahhmm… mag-asawa na ba sila nyan? kung hindi pa, sana’y nagkatuluyan sila).

    nagustuhan ko rin ang kwento mo. :)

    Dragon Lady’s last blog post..L.P. #10: Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://jacababes.blogspot.com

  8. Meeya says:

    ris, i loved your short story! its perfect for the theme – pag hindi ka talaga nag-take ng first step, nakakatakot man yung daan na tatawirin mo, hindi mo mararating yung happy ending. :)

    and i loved the picture! sobrang sweet nila. i wish someone would take a picture of hubby and me that way, too. i’m sure your friends will cherish this photo. :)

    MyMemes: LP Kasalan
    MyFinds: LP Kasalan

    • iris says:

      uwi kayo dito at magpipicturan tayo sa beach! hehe. salamat mee. siguro sobrang inspired lang ako nung mga panahong sinulat ko yan. ;)

  9. alpha says:

    hay.. ang ganda ng kwento..

    oo iris, kasal ko yung LP ko..

    alpha’s last blog post..LP: Pag-iisang Dibdib. on http://alphadf.com

  10. eDs says:

    uyyyy! nakakakilig naman ng ung entry ha, napakaromantic! obvious na kumikilig ka sa litrato kaibigan hehehe :)

    Magandang Huwebes!

    http://edsnanquil.com/?p=799

    eDs’s last blog post..♥ LP#10: Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://edsnanquil.com/?p=799

  11. weng says:

    awwww, ang tamis nila. tila di nila alintana kung may nakakakita sa kanila. katuwa!

    hapi huwebes!

    Sumpaan
    Abay

    weng’s last blog post..LP #10: Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://munchkinmommy.wordpress.com

  12. Dyes says:

    hang swit naman! sana laging nasa honeymoon stage ang mga mag-asawa :)

    Dyes’s last blog post..L. P. # 10 : Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://yaneeps-pics.blogspot.com/2008/06/l-p-10-pag-iisang-dibdib.html

  13. Reflexes says:

    hay kay ganda ng kwento at ang larawan ay nag-papa*kilig* :)

    Reflexes’s last blog post..LP10: Marriage (Pag-iisang Dibdib) on http://manillapaper.com

  14. julie says:

    Ang ganda ng kwento, nakakakaba :) Napakasweet naman ng iyong larawan.

    Magandang Huwebes!

    julie’s last blog post..Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://greenbucks.info

  15. Kotsengkuba says:

    walang hanggan.. ang dagat ;-)

  16. Cookie says:

    ang sweet naman..ganda ng kwento mo :)

    Cookie
    http://scroochchronicles.blogspot.com/

  17. MommyBa says:

    salamat sa pagbahagi mo ng napakagandang kwentong ito.

    at napakaganda rin ng litrato.

    magandang huwebes po :)

    MommyBa’s last blog post..HSMS: Catch-Up Time on http://yayaba.blogspot.com

  18. lidie says:

    ang ganda ng shot! at ang ganda ng kwento…
    magandang huwebes sa’yo!

    lidie’s last blog post..LP #10 :: Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://www.beybi-gurl.blogspot.com

  19. komski kuno says:

    “Ang mahalaga, andito ka na.”

    Ganun nga talaga ata, pero hindi pa rin dapat ipagsawalang-halaga ang mga pinagdaanan bago makarating kung nasaan tayo ngayon:)

    Haaay, sana andito na siya, hehehe.

    komski kuno’s last blog post..Ikaw at ako on http://komski.net

  20. Pinky says:

    Ayos…pang-”movie trailer” ang dating! :)

    Happy Huwebes sa iyo, Iris!

    Pinky’s last blog post..LP #10: Pag-Iisang Dibdib on http://chinois972.wordpress.com

  21. Thess says:

    Naku sister, bigla ko tuloy naalala na nanlalamig kamay ko nung kasal ko ha ha ha! Pagsubok kasi eh, nakaka nerbyos talaga ;)

    nice shot to go with your story :)

    Thess’s last blog post..LP #: Kasalan na! on http://www.thesserie.com

  22. g says:

    Happy ending, pero new beginning! Ang sweet nila at ang ganda ng ngiti ng iong kaibigan!

    g’s last blog post..Litratong Pinoy – Pag-iisang dibdib on http://mirageasusual.blogspot.com

  23. ces says:

    natakot ako akala ko kung ano na ang mangyayari! pero maganda ang kinalabasan…at napaka-romantic ng larawan! kinikilig ako! kasal na ba sila? haha!

    ces’s last blog post..LP #10: my best friend’s weddings on http://cesanciano.net/spices

    • iris says:

      morbid ang iniisip mo ces. hehehe. salamat at kinilig ka, na-fulfill ang purpose ng litrato! :)

      hindi pa sila kasal, pero malapit na siguro. yaan mo, ippressure ko na dahil naka-post na ang picture nila dito. haha.

  24. jeanny says:

    ganda ng kwento…romatic, madamdamin.

    Happy LP kapatid :)

    jeanny’s last blog post..LP# 10 Pag-iisang dibdib on jeannycdj.com

  25. Leah says:

    napaka-sweet naman ng larawang iyan! baka langgamin tayo. :D

    happy huwebes sa iyo!

    Leah’s last blog post..LP: Pag-iisang Dibdib on http://leahjoseph.com

  26. K says:

    …and no matter how tough things get, there is always the light at the end of tunnel…you just have to work towards it.

    Ganda ng kuha, parang from the movie of Dawn and Richard way way back…

    K’s last blog post..What NOT to blog about on http://www.knoizki.net

  27. teys says:

    madamdamin ang kwento :) happy ending naman di ba? :D

    teys’s last blog post..Friendship Tag on littlekitestudios.blogspot.com

  28. mousey says:

    magaling ang kwento at romatik ang picture.

  29. Em Dy says:

    Maganda ang kwento at litrato. Ang pagtawid para ding pagpapakasal. Urong. Sulong. May wedding jitters.

    Em Dy’s last blog post..Madamdaming Paglalakad on http://capturedbeat.blogspot.com

  30. betchay says:

    ang ganda ng larawan ng iyong mga kaibigan… romantic but not mushy

  31. Ang gandang litrato at kwento!

    Ang aking LP ay naka post na rin:

    Shutter Happenings, daan ka kung may oras ka.

    Salamat!

    ShutterHappyJenn’s last blog post..Pag-Iisang Dibdib / Wedding on http://shutterhappenings.blogspot.com

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